{"id":523,"date":"2021-10-17T08:07:10","date_gmt":"2021-10-17T08:07:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/wordpress.stary.com\/wordpress\/?p=523"},"modified":"2022-03-19T08:08:43","modified_gmt":"2022-03-19T08:08:43","slug":"swa-iii-editors-feedback-1-how-do-you-write-a-good-blurb-in-swa-iii","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/official.test.stary.ltd\/resources\/swa-iii-editors-feedback-1-how-do-you-write-a-good-blurb-in-swa-iii.html","title":{"rendered":"SWA III | Editors&#8217; Feedback 1: How Do You Write a Good &#8220;Blurb&#8221; in SWA III"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>For Task 1, \u201cWrite the Description on the \u2018Blurb\u2019 of your Story,\u201d we have received a lot of submissions. To help you write better in the contest, our editors have given their professional opinion and feedback on some \u201cBlurbs.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-524\" src=\"http:\/\/wordpress.stary.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2022\/03\/Editors-Feedback-1.png\" alt=\"Editors' Feedback 1\" width=\"940\" height=\"788\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Let&#8217;s take a look at the feedback from our editors, and hopefully you can get some sparks from it.<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/bit.ly\/2YXWe28\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Girl Power<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/bit.ly\/3aK1Bou\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Fall for a Billionaire<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/bit.ly\/2Xj8SZn\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Dare to Be a Teen<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"https:\/\/bit.ly\/2Z0oG42\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">LGBT+<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Keep up the good work, and we are expecting more! Hope you all can make a difference in the Stary Writing Academy (SWA) III.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>For Task 1, \u201cWrite the Description on the \u2018Blurb\u2019 of your Story,\u201d we have received a lot of submissions. 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